Iam so confused
iam so much in doubt
crying without any reason
sometimes even shout.
May be you care about me
thats why tolerating so much of it
but i got hurt when u said
"i did try,but i realised i suck at it"
After all iam a human
have mistaken,havn't committed any sin
so just tell me once
that you like me more,even more than him.
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Welll,,,,,,,,,, apart from some grammatical and linguistically mistakes, i liked it..... to be frank i didn't like the creation so much so.... but i liked the fact that a guy so lonely and pissed of wid this world going for the only option........... the poetry...... now see this.......
Was about to tell you,
you acquire a plenty of place in my heart,
but then stopped suddenly,
to calculate,
what it would be for an exchange if ,
ever i had to make it with yours,
as you already have given pleanty to others,
the thing going in my head and heart is the one and only,
you would have given a chance to me.................
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